Thoughts on the Inadequacy of Words

A scene from the BBC TV production of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, depicting Ford Prefect and Arthur Dent

In The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, Douglas Adams’ brilliantly humorous sci-fi novel, there is a hilarious sequence in which, right after the Earth has been demolished by a hostile alien force, the planet’s sole survivor finds himself stranded inside an alien spacecraft. He is in the company of an extra-terrestrial who happens to be a field researcher for The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy – an electronic guidebook of sorts for adventurous explorers of the universe. Deeply traumatized by the utter destruction of his home planet, Arthur Dent, the sole survivor, looks up what the guidebook has to say about the Earth. He is outraged by what he reads on the electronic screen:

“What? Harmless ? Is that all it’s got to say? Harmless! One word!”

In response, Ford Prefect, the unusually named ET researcher of the galactic guidebook, casually shrugs his shoulders and replies:

“Well, there are a hundred billion stars in the Galaxy, and only a limited amount of space in the book’s microprocessors,” he said, “and no one knew much about the Earth, of course.”

Arthur Dent, the last human survivor of the smoldering ruin that used to be planet Earth, replies:

“Well, for God’s sake, I hope you managed to rectify that a bit.”

Ford Prefect reassures Arthur with the words:

“Oh yes, well, I managed to transmit a new entry off to the editor. He had to trim it a bit, but it’s still an improvement.”
“And what does it say now?” asked Arthur.
Mostly harmless,” admitted Ford with a slightly embarrassed cough.

Adams, Douglas. The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy.
Del Rey, 1995,
Chapter 6, pp. 47-8

That is a sobering thought, emerging from author Douglas Adams’ witty imagination – the idea that all that might remain, one day, of so many millennia of human civilization – of all its artistic and technological accomplishments, of its glorious empires, concrete constructions, and majestic steel towers – might be the words “Mostly harmless” in some alien galactic guidebook! But how far is this observation from the truth about the world as we know it even today?

The words we use to describe the world around us – all words, in fact – are essentially labels. They are symbols that represent – and, in the bargain, simplify – a more complex underlying reality. Words, by their very nature, obfuscate reality as much as they clarify it, and conceal as much as they reveal. For instance, you can always add more qualifying words to elucidate the context of any word. A car may be more accurately described as “a blue car” and, drilling down even further, as “a blue Tesla four-door sedan.” This process of verbal explication is infinite because the underlying reality described by these words is infinitely complex. 

Because you can always add more words to elaborate on any word, it follows, logically, that all words are simplifications of reality – all words, by their very nature, are inadequate. One can never capture the full detail and complexity of the underlying reality in any communication. At some level, one is always simplifying in one’s representation of reality, no matter how detailed or complex one’s communicative symbology – or language – might be. In fact, one of the principles of good writing in the modern era is that simpler is often better. The subtitle of this chapter, for example, would have been much less effective if it were something like: Further Reflections on the Limitations of Verbal Language.

In truth, no one can fully comprehend the emotions or experiences of another unless one relived the exact same experiences and emotions in the exact same context – in other words, the identical historical setting and life story or back story – as the other. As such, all communication is a generalization or simplification at some level – even telepathic or empathic communication. The only question here is: at what level are you generalizing or simplifying the events, circumstances, experiences, or descriptions you are attempting to communicate?

The episode I cited above from Douglas Adams’ novel makes one wonder about the history books. What has been left out? What has been overlooked? What should have been included, but wasn’t? And, finally, what has been overstated? Can it be said that what we read as history today is the equivalent of the “tabloid journalism” of the past? And will future generations form their assumptions about the history of our times from surviving copies of the National Enquirer?

If one considers the history of a random hypothetical remote village in the middle of Borneo, for the sake of argument, it is apparent that none of the events in all of the thousands of years of its existence have, in all likelihood, even been remembered by the locals, let alone been recorded in their annals or chronicles, or included in modern history textbooks! But even so, one must wonder why these forgotten events are any less historically relevant than the events that have been included in history – events such as the Fall of the Roman Empire, the French and American Revolutions, the Napoleonic Wars, and so on.

History is a set of lies agreed upon.

Napoleon Bonaparte

Corsican general and erstwhile emperor of France, Napoleon Bonaparte

In his rather cynical estimation of the significance of history, the famed Corsican general and former emperor of France, Napoleon, appears to suggest that history is ultimately no more than a subjective cultural narrative rather than objective scientific facts. They are narratives that have been and continue to be perpetuated by certain interested parties for some reason – more than likely, political in nature. The circumstances from which history arises and is recorded certainly suggest that this may be the case.

In the study of literature, there is the concept of the “space between words” – of what is left unsaid or unspoken in any verbal communication. It is the realm of subtext and the connotative meanings of words – to “reading between the lines” – the missing details, the omissions, the overlooked substance or filler material in between the printed, legible text. Why are certain details omitted from any given text while others are included? Do the inclusions and omissions change the tenor of the text? Do they subtly – or dramatically – modify the meaning of the text? Do they adjust one’s concept of reality as perceived through the lens of the text in question?

English Renaissance playwright William Shakespeare

The illustrious English Renaissance playwright William Shakespeare coined or invented nearly two thousand new words and phrases in the English language through his literary usage. This clearly suggests that he found the language and vocabulary of his time to be woefully inadequate for his needs. Shakespeare’s original coinages were so vivid and effective that the words and expressions he invented survive to the present day – otherwise, we would all likely be speaking the language of Chaucer, to a large extent!

Shakespeare’s Hamlet, as portrayed on screen by actor Laurence Olivier

In Hamlet, his most widely recognized play, Shakespeare comments on the futility and hollowness of words:

POLONIUS: What do you read, my lord?
HAMLET: Words, words, words.
POLONIUS: What is the matter, my lord?
HAMLET: Between who?
POLONIUS: I mean the matter that you read, my lord.
HAMLET: Slanders, sir….

Shakespeare, William. Hamlet. Penguin Classics, 2016. 
Act II, Scene 2, ll. 208-14

Clearly, Shakespeare is reflecting on the emptiness of words – not just in the sense that words are no replacement for action, but also in that words are inadequate to describe reality. For Hamlet, words appear to be insufficient to describe his experiences and overwrought emotional state. For Shakespeare, meanwhile, the vocabulary at his disposal clearly did not measure up to his needs for self-expression, which is probably what compelled him to coin nearly two thousand new words and phrases in the language!

American writer Ernest Hemingway

The celebrated American writer Ernest Hemingway reveals his distinctive genius in his written works in a very different way. Hemingway’s writing style is simple and direct. He avoids using adjectives and, instead, focuses on the use of direct nouns:

Hemingway puts his emphasis on nouns because, among other parts of speech, they come closest to things. Stringing them along by means of conjunctions, he approximates the actual flow of experience.

Levin, Harry. “Observations on the Style of Ernest Hemingway.” 
The Kenyon Review, vol. 13, No. 4, 1951, p.600.

Hemingway’s deliberate use of broad verbal strokes to paint his descriptive picture of reality clearly points to the inadequacy of words. He leaves it to the reader to fill in the gaps from their own life experience and imagination rather than engaging in lengthy or complex descriptions, psychological analyses, parenthetical statements, or asides. The deliberate tactic of using highly simplified linguistic formations points to that which is left unsaid – deliberately omitted – because, perhaps, there are no words adequate to describe that which is unspoken.

Another writer, famous for his deliberations on the vocabulary and structure of the English language, is George Orwell. His works have recently enjoyed a dramatic resurgence in popularity, thanks to the current political climate. Orwell, a.k.a. Eric Blair, was a contemporary of Hemingway – in fact, he fought in the Spanish Civil War against the forces of Fascism, even while Hemingway was covering the war as a correspondent for the North American Newspaper Alliance.

English writer George Orwell

In his widely read essay Politics and the English Language, Orwell describes the use of “political language” – how politicians use language to obfuscate, confuse, and deceive the public in a number of ways, including the use of euphemisms and vague statements. Interestingly, Orwell also comments that language not only reflects the current condition of the society from which it emerges but can also be instrumental in shaping, even redeeming, society as a whole.

Orwell’s best-known critique of language and vocabulary appears in his novel Nineteen Eighty-Four. In this seminal literary work, Orwell describes how the ruling party of the totalitarian state controls the public’s hearts and minds by altering the very definitions of words in popular usage and rewriting the narratives of history.

But where did that knowledge exist? Only in his own consciousness, which in any case must soon be annihilated. And if all others accepted the lie which the Party imposed – if all records told the same tale – then the lie passed into history and became truth. ‘Who controls the past,’ ran the Party slogan, ‘controls the future: who controls the present controls the past.’ And yet the past, though of its nature alterable, never had been altered. Whatever was true now was true from everlasting to everlasting. It was quite simple. All that was needed was an unending series of victories over your own memory. ‘Reality control’, they called it: in Newspeak, ‘doublethink’

Orwell, George. 1984. HarperCollins, 2013, Part 1, Chapter 3, p. 44.

These processes of redefining popular words and rewriting popular history became distinctive practices of 20th-century totalitarian states, including Maoist China and the Stalinist Soviet Union. Perhaps, echoes of these processes still continue in the media and cultural landscape of the present day. Widespread censorship, cancel culture, and historical revisionism prevalent in culture and academia these days have a distinctively Orwellian undertone.

Words, after all, are the ultimate tool of deception – which is why the mastery of words is so important for lawyers and politicians! Because words are double-edged, capable of both obfuscating and clarifying, simultaneously revealing and concealing the truth, they must be approached with caution. Reading the “fine print,” reading “between the lines,” reading nonverbal cues, understanding context and subtext, and the denotative and connotative meanings of words are all practices critical to effective reading, comprehension, and communication.

In essence, short of achieving empathic, telepathic nonverbal communication with others, we must learn the skills of effective reading in order to communicate thoughtfully and well, and to avoid the absurdly nightmarish scenarios that have become commonplace in the news cycle these days!


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